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IELTS Essay [Writing Task-2] -Strong impact of social media on Mental Health

Task-2 Essay Writing

Write an essay on the following topic. Minimum Word 250 & 40 Minutes Time

Many people believe in the strong impact of social media on Mental Health however some others do not believe on it. Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

Introduction

The technology and innovation are prime factors for modern human life. Social media play vital role for every age of human life. It is a kind of networking system which effects on mental health and physical health too. However one has to consider his/her time how much they spend on it. Consuming enough may destruct our daily routine which directly leads us mental illness.

Body/Discussion

A survey conducted by WHO in 2022 announced that 59.9% people in the world are social media users. The connection and learning capacity can be increased through social media users.  Social media like face book, twitter, Whatsaap everything give much information all around the world. It provides both necessary and unnecessary news which highly associated with hypertension, anxieties, other psychological disorder as well as loss of creative and memory power. 

It certainly disturbs our regular activity consequently contributes on little sleep, monotonous problem caused mental illness. People believe facebook and messenger can improve a sense of belongings but it is proved not to be good for mental health. People of Nepal were very hard working in the past but the situation is different now. They spend their quality time in using social media. If people watch many videos having negative contents how will they get progress in life? On the other hand artificial intelligence also create lazy learning environment.

Conclusion

To sum up, it is believed by some individuals that the best way to use social media is by allocating a limited time occasionally. But in my opinion, it is good to use them for only our concerned field as work or study. We can use them wisely and per our need.


Ms. 
Debika Kafle

[Med & MA English]


Certified IELTS Instructor


Reference

British Council Kathmandu Nepal

IDP IELTS Nepal

Academic Writing Platform by Timilsena (2023)



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