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IELTS Writing Task-1 Band 9 Sample

 IELTS Writing Task -1

The two Pie Charts below show the online shopping sales for retail showroom in Kathmandu in 2015 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Online Sales for Retail Showroom in Kathmandu in 2015 & 2020





The two pie charts compare the percentage of online sales across different retail sectors in Kathmandu in the two different years, 2015 and 2020.

Overall, the online sale of clothing item and food items dropped, however, the craze for cosmetic items and furniture increased during the five years.

To begin with, in 2015, the majority of online sales were accounted for clothing sector with 35%, however, this percentage has dropped to 30% by 2020. During the same five year period, the number of people deciding to by cosmetic items online increased and the transactions jump from 22% to 32%, making it the retail showroom with the largest proportion in online market.

In 2015, the food items industry boasted and impressive 25% of the total online sales in Kathmandu. However, by the year 2020, the figure had fallen considerably to 15%. Interestingly, online sales of furniture eventually overlook sales of furniture. Eventually overlook sales of cosmetics although furniture still represented 23% of market.



Debu Timilsena
(IELTS/PTE Instructor-M.Ed., M.A. English)

Certified & Experienced



References

British Council Kathmandu Nepal

IDP IELTS Nepal

Academic Writing Platform by Timilsena (2023)


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